Hey guys so a few questions after reading my rough draft…
1. Which character do you think I should focus on for the macrocosm/microcosm relationship? (Abraham, Sarah, or Jacob)
2. Do you think I should elaborate on the fact that someone across the world is trying to unite my family on the sole basis of our last names?
3. Any comments or suggestions about what I need to add or remove to make my paper more cohesive and flow a lot better?
Thanks for your time!