Hey guys, here are a few issues I am having with my rough draft so far.
1) I know that I want to tie in the modern-day Egyptian struggle, but I am unsure of how to make it cohesive with the rest of my paper. I know I can get the required length if I just had some tips on how to do this.
2) I would like some ideas of other sources I could use. Maybe another psychological study? Your input would be greatly appreciated.
3) I would also like to know if there are any places in my paper that seem ambiguous, so I can strengthen that part for the final draft.