My rough draft today is more like a mix of a draft and an outline. I have some book sources I plan on using and still have more researching to do.
A couple things I could use some help with:
1) I need more sources in regards to male and female relationships, as well as an analysis of sexual trauma as a cause for degrading sexual practices, such as stripping. Someone had suggested this idea on my prospectus, but I’m not aware of the sources which may cover this topic. Any suggestions?
2) Are there other points I should include which are not already there? And is there a specific point already made that particularly compels you that maybe I should go into more depth about?
3) Any kind of feedback you have will be of great help….I know it’s not much so far, but any and all feedback is welcome; please do not hold back.
Also, looking back at my notes just now, there is one point I did not include that I want to further explore. A couple years ago, I had seen an episode of Oprah where two women were sisters, but were also mother and daughter, as a result of an incestuous relationship with their father.