Things to help me with:
I have too much information to sift through. I would like to narrow the topic just a bit, which areas should I develop and what could I do without?
I would also like to include more recent information. I have some that I have not included in my paper, but any additional advice would be helpful.
I am trying to focus on the people as a whole and not point blame in any direction. If you see problem areas, please tell me.