Here is my rough draft.
Below are some questions I have for readers:
1.) What do you think my purpose is? Do I get my point across?
2.) I included a couple of paragraphs of background information about the types of law and the P writer. Do these help to support my point or should they be removed?
3.) How do you feel about my suggestion that holiness is a universal theme and not limited to those with religious affiliation?
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